Dance

Feb. 6th, 2007 08:41 pm
tattooedsiren: (remushermione // DO NOT TAKE)
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Title: Dance
Ships: Remus/Hermione
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Say it with me now ~ me ... don't ... own.
Summary: Hermione looks up, surprised but genuinely pleased when Remus walks over to her. He smiles down at her and then holds out his hand. “Dance with me?”
Authors Notes: Written for my lovely LJ stalker - [livejournal.com profile] alexi_lupin.



Dance

If she has to tell one more person how okay she is, she might scream.

She knows they mean well but she can’t take it any more. What does she have to do? Stand up on the table and scream, “I’m fine, happy even, so stop asking and leave me the hell alone!”?

Part of her can understand their concern. It must have been a great surprise for anyone on the outside. For anyone who didn’t see the implosion of her and Ron’s relationship, who didn’t see the chance meeting between Ron and Luna instantly develop into something more, who didn’t see them fall in love and brighten each others lives, Ron and Luna getting married only seven months after she and Ron broke up might seem hasty. But Hermione knows better. Ron and Luna are perfect for each other. And she is thrilled for them. She really is.

And now it appears she has to convince every guest at the reception of this.

She brings her glass to her lips, sipping slowly. Despite the constant condescending looks being thrown in her direction, Hermione really is enjoying the day. She dances once with Harry and once with the groom but otherwise remains at her table all night. Her table companions are all her old Hogwarts classmates so she is never left alone, even with Harry and Ginny spending most of the night on the dance floor (or in a dark corner or two).

It’s towards the end of the evening that she comes back from the bathroom to find her table deserted. She sits down, grateful for a moment of peace. She loves her friends, but suspects they have taken pity on ‘the ex-girlfriend’, hence why she has been surrounded by people all day. But she adores Ron and Luna and she knows this is how it should be.

Hermione looks up, surprised but genuinely pleased when Remus walks over to her. He smiles down at her and then holds out his hand. “Dance with me?”

She smiles, putting her hand in his and allowing him to lead her over to the dance floor.

The orchestral music is slow and beautiful. Remus’ hand is firm on her waist as they sway to the music. His gaze is focused on her and it doesn’t make her feel uncomfortable. On the contrary, it makes her feel safe.

“Aren’t you going to ask me?” Hermione says at last.

“Ask you what?”

“How I’m feeling about Ron being married.”

He pauses a moment. “Do you want me to ask you that?”

She smiles softly at him. “No.”

“Good,” he says, running his thumb along hers. “Because I would much rather concentrate on dancing with the most beautiful woman in the room.”

The statement shocks her, and her eyes search his face for any sign of jest. But he just smiles at her, and though she wants to protest the validity of his statement, for some reason she can’t do it.

“Well if you wait a few minutes I’m sure Fleur will be free.”

He laughs softly and Hermione finds herself smiling like a mad woman.

They continue dancing in silence. As the music continues, Hermione feels a growing anxiety in her chest. She doesn’t know what it is but she is unprepared for the intensity of it. And then she realises she and Remus have gotten closer, their bodies pressed together, and Remus moves a hand from her waist to her back. Her deep purple dress is backless and she can feel his skin on hers and her stomach swoops. She feels his fingertips, light on her back, tracing small circles, as though they too were dancing. She gingerly leans her head on his shoulder and when she does, she can feel, just for a split second, Remus tense. Then there is an exhale of breath, his arms tighten around her, and she grins into his shoulder.

Too soon, the music stops, the song over. They slowly separate, eyes locked on each other. Remus smiles, rather nervously Hermione thinks, and grips her hand, bringing it up to his mouth and pressing a soft kiss to her knuckles.

“Thanks for the dance,” Remus says softly.

He turns to walk away, but before she realises what she is doing, Hermione is reaching out and seizing his hand. He turns and looks at her, waiting. Hermione’s heart pounds heavy in her chest. She is dimly aware that while they stand in the middle of the dance floor a new song has started and people around them are swaying to the music. She takes a deep breath and leans up, pressing her lips to his.

It is soft and gentle, not overtly passionate. But it lifts Hermione’s heart in a way no other kiss has done. She wraps her arms around his neck, his arms firm around her, and even as they kiss they begin to sway to the music.

At last they break away. Hermione smiles at him and he smiles back. Remus kisses her temple, soft, and then they continue dancing, cheek to cheek.

It was their first dance. But not their last.

Date: 2007-02-07 02:47 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-02-06 10:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caitlen.livejournal.com
awww *sniffle* beautiful.

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Date: 2007-02-06 12:01 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-02-07 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Thanks hun. :O)

Date: 2007-02-06 12:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sekhmet2.livejournal.com
Oh, that's just gorgeous--I could see every single image so clearly in my mind as I read. What a lovely, sweet story. You know that you've accomplished the impossible--made me see Remus with someone other than Sirius! I never thought that would EVER happen! ;-)

Date: 2007-02-07 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Yay - if I can make it realistic enough to tear Remus away from Sirius for you then that makes me very happy. :O)

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Date: 2007-02-06 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] matromao.livejournal.com
It made me think of perfect dances where nobody ever has two left feet. : >

I'm trying to imagine the reactions of the people who are watching them dance. They probably think that Hermione is on the rebound.

Date: 2007-02-07 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Well, people can be perfectly dances in fics. :O)

Maybe they do. I dont think they care though. :O)

Date: 2007-02-06 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maryweasley.livejournal.com
Very, very sweet

Date: 2007-02-07 03:00 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-02-06 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justmehere1971.livejournal.com
yes, definitely an "AWWW" moment.

And a little bit of heat too. The description of his fingers 'dancing' on her skin...that would cause of moment of warmth in any woman...if it was Remus doing it. ;>

Great job. Innocent, yet very preview-ish. :D

TA

Date: 2007-02-07 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Thankyou very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :O)

Date: 2007-02-06 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tudorpot.livejournal.com
Romantic and enjoyable. A sweet moment.
.

Date: 2007-02-07 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Thanks very much.

Date: 2007-02-06 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwenlliana.livejournal.com
Lovely, just lovely. This made me smile... thank you for that.

Date: 2007-02-07 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
You are very welcome. :O)

Date: 2007-02-06 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slashissilly.livejournal.com
Very sweet. This made my day. :)

Date: 2007-02-07 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :O)

Date: 2007-02-06 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocky-mousse.livejournal.com
I was close - oh so very close to skipping reading this fic as I thought it was from a community where the work is less than great. Then I saw it appeared twice on my F-list and I checked the username. Sure enough, 'Tatooedsiren' so! Although I should really be out in the loungeroom playing happy families with my host family or in my room getting ready for bed (it's only 8pm but I have to get up at 6am every day, so!) what do I do_ I read. And it was lovely, really, I actually squeed at the end as sad as that is. A perfect ending to a less than perfect day. Thank you. I am aware I owe you a fic and I promise to work on it when I have time! =)

Date: 2007-02-07 03:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Well I'm very flattered you took time out of your new life to read my little fic. :O) And I'm very glad you enjoed it. Hope everything is going well for you there. And no hurry on the fic, I'll be here whenever its ready. :O)

Date: 2007-02-06 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mistaria.livejournal.com
Aww! ::squee::

Love your LJ layout lots btw. :)

Date: 2007-02-07 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
*grins*

Thanks!!

Date: 2007-02-06 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lupintonks85.livejournal.com
Beautiful...I loved it!

Date: 2007-02-07 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
I'm glad. :O)

Date: 2007-02-06 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dorrie6.livejournal.com
Oh, how lovely and delicate this is.

Date: 2007-02-07 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Thanks very much. :O)
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Date: 2007-02-07 03:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Thankyou so much. :O)

Date: 2007-02-07 01:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missmerrow.livejournal.com
Straight!Remus is so much fun. And so underappreciated in fandom. This was really sweet and just the perfect little pick-me-up. Thank you! :)

Date: 2007-02-07 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
He really is underappreciated.

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2007-02-07 06:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexi-lupin.livejournal.com
THOU HATH KILLED ME DEAD.

OOOOOOMG.
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥


Not only was that freaking FABULOUS, it echoes a story I wrote not so long ago about me and the object of my desires (lol wish fulfilment) which no one has ever seen. Ever. That's almost CREEPY. I knew you knew my buttons, but WOW-EE.

And Remus/Hermione of course! OMG I LOVE YOU.

Date: 2007-02-07 07:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
*revives you*

Clearly you and I have some kind of psychic thing going on. :O) I'm very glad you liked it.

*hugs*

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Date: 2007-02-07 07:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] star2954.livejournal.com
*hugs Remus/Hermione* I've missed them!

This was gorgeous hun, I loved the tenderness, and I hope you write more soon!

Date: 2007-02-07 08:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
I've missed them too. *group hug* They deserve some fluff and happiness after the angst I put them through last time. :O)

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2007-02-07 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phantomberkanna.livejournal.com
What a very sweet story! I can totally picture them as a couple.

Date: 2007-02-08 02:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Thankyou very much. :O)

Date: 2007-02-08 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unomesowell.livejournal.com
Awww! I don;t understand how to ship these two . . I think you have to squint a little and cock your head to the lef maybe . . .but so sweet!

Date: 2007-02-09 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Just accept that their personalities go really well together and just go with it. :O) Thanks for reading!!

Date: 2007-02-09 07:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alovelyfix.livejournal.com
I really don't know how I managed to come across your journal, but I just wanted to say that this fic was absolutely adorable! I love Remus and Hermoine together, and this was just priceless :D

Date: 2007-02-09 07:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Well I'm glad you enjoyed it, no matter how you ended up getting here. :O)

Date: 2007-02-10 06:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maddyriddle.livejournal.com
Awww. Lovely. *sighs*

Date: 2007-02-10 08:20 am (UTC)

Date: 2007-03-22 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lidi.livejournal.com
aww, it's so beautiful!
and tender. and sweet. and just so wonderfully right!

great fic. loved it!

Date: 2007-03-22 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Thanks hun. I am so glad you liked it - especially since I asked you to read it. lol. Thanks again - for everything.

Date: 2007-03-25 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lamenting-quill.livejournal.com
*melts* That was the epitome of lovely, dear! So moving and sweet, and warming. Perfect!

Date: 2007-03-25 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattooedsiren.livejournal.com
Awww ... thankyou so much. :O)

Date: 2007-04-09 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jcrowell.livejournal.com
Beautiful!

Date: 2007-04-09 04:10 am (UTC)

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